Woodwork is a brief tale that I came up with as a writing exercise in 'flash fiction' i.e. write it straight through with minimal editing. I've tidied it up a bit more since finishing, cleaning up the sentences that stood out as clunkers to me. Click the links below to take a look:
Interesting theme you've got going - women (heartbreak), paper and wood. I think this was much better than Paper Chase. It was a little hard to care about you and Alfie, but "Mr Brooks" sucked me in right away. Then scared the hell out of me. Nice work!
Interesting theme you've got
Interesting theme you've got going - women (heartbreak), paper and wood. I think this was much better than Paper Chase. It was a little hard to care about you and Alfie, but "Mr Brooks" sucked me in right away. Then scared the hell out of me. Nice work!
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